wayra

rhythmical waves crash

bang, splash as moonlight twinkles

soothing sad exhausted hearts

nature is refreshing

life lightens survival in sight

 

d’Verse,  wayra form, incorporating onomatopoeia, Grace

The elements of the Wayra are:
1.a pentastich, a poem in 5 lines.
2.syllabic, 5-7-7-6-8
3.unrhymed.

45 comments

  1. bang, splash as moonlight twinkles

    soothing sad exhausted hearts

    I loved these lines and how that was followed by refreshing nature. What a beautiful poem in this new form for me – each word felt carefully chosen.

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  2. That’s amazing Kate, you’ve managed to capture so much in such a short poem and each time I read it, I catch a glimpse of something else. Wonderful

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