life is but a bowl of bliss
if a kindly life I kiss
anger or envy will rob
vapourizing me into a yob
healthier to be a kindly caring wiz
ban busyness twisting me into a tis
more and better is a fob
turns me into a right nob
love and life I’ll surely miss
if I self-destruct and hiss
why get lost in the mob
that surely leads to sob
caring concern like my own sis
vital to becoming that bowl of bliss!
© 2021 aroused.blog
So beautiful and loved the words – Bowl of Bliss!!!
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A bowl of bliss! We’d all like one of those. 😊💖
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I like that bowl o bliss – sounds like how life should be 🙂
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For me this style of verses can be read in two ways. I read it as is, with the smaller text sounding as echoes to the larger text. Then reading each set of text as separate entities offers me another view. Thanks so much Kate for sharing your versions of poetic bliss.
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Haven’t seen you much lately. Just came to spend a bit of time and say I hope your Sunday has been wonderful. I agree that Sis and I together make a bit of bliss. Hope you are liking your new home. Time passes so fast, it might not be new anymore.
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Delightful post to read Kate.
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Life is a bowl of bliss — heart-smiles are made of this. 😊
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Beautiful! Makes me grin and laugh! 😀
Oh! Let’s swim happily in this big bowl of bliss!
Even a second of this beautiful life we don’t want to miss! 🙂
Your wonderful poems always hit just the right spot!
To walk away without feeling love and joy, I cannot! 🙂
(((HUGS))) 🙂
PS…Your flower photos are FABULOUS! 🙂
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I love this line so much 😀
❤
David
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A welcome change from all the pandemic news….bliss! May we all experience it. Thanks Kate for the reminder.
~nan
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Life is surely a bowl of bliss and we all are in a blissful state. Such a lovely and beautiful poem, Kate. Felt so nice reading your poem and what an amazing picture.
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Thanks for this thought provoking poem, Kate.
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thank Robbie, it’s possible to get there with persistent mind training
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“life is but a bowl of bliss” this should be our mantra…
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‘Life is but a bowl of bliss’ – how lovely!
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Mmm really enjoyed the bowl of bliss! Stunning lily! 😍
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Kindness over anger. And yes, bliss any day. Great poem and sentiments my friend.
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Well, Kate, this poem is for surely blissful. Bowl of bliss. I love that!
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Better to fly from flower to flower like a bee to make and taste the honey of life, Kate !
Love ❤
Michel
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Hehe! I had to decipher the slang but I think I managed… Love the image of a bowl of bliss with the smiling lily!
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oops thanks for pointing that out … I was so busy rhyming that I didn’t notice it slipping in! Yob = yobbo = richard cranium; nob = snob; sob = cry … have a great day Val!
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Much wisdom does your beautiful poem hold, much to be told …not sure why but I found it fun be a little play with a little rhythm there Kate my dear! 😊 But truly a well spoken truth ❤️
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ah bliss produces such joy Jenna it’s difficult to verbalise 🙂
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Great poem…this one was so much fun to read. Outstanding job with this bowl of bliss…:)
🙂 🙂 🙂 You always inspire me! Thank you!
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I like the way you alternated hard and soft sounds. Both are part of life. (K)
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Bowl is certainly a bliss, for multitude of reasons 🙂
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What fun!! Feggit about a bowl of cherries. I’ll take a bowl of bliss any day. ❤
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Sounds like my bowl of fruit salad I made up tonight … of banana, apple, mandarin, and kiwi-fruit .. then topped with ice-cream …
https://1drv.ms/u/s!Asumt4cZ9A65hOkrHwzFZTbC4h8VrQ?e=ajAJ0q
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You caught me with the title Kate and I wasn’t disappointed. I’ll take a serve of your bowl o bliss any day. It’s divine
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This is such a wise poem.
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Beautiful lines and so well rhymed.
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