BIRD SONG
Spotted on the neighbour’s fence as I returned from the Farmer’s Market, he waited till I went home for my camera, patient little fellow!
Waltz Wave was developed by Leo Waltz. It is a syllabic form with a title and 19 lines, pattern is: 1/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/3/4/3/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/1. Words may be split to fit the pattern. There is no rhyme and the subject should be calming.
tide
gently
laps
osprey
circles high
butcher
birds
song of
bliss sun peeks
rousing slumber
kettle boils
joyous
love
knowing
I’m alive
as world
slow-
ly un-
folds
Sunrise Sunday morning, what a joy!
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Amazing imagery Kate.. I love that Bird
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Delightful poetry to dabble into. Love the bird shot and so colorful:)
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A beautiful picture Kate and few words that paint a stunning picture.
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Delightful image of a very patient bird. Sometimes our own patience is rewarded with a photo such as this. Kate, I continue to enjoy your poetry journey.
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this poem makes me wanna take on the hand of my beloved and dance the waltz, only slower… i love the sunset photo too Kate
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Stunning sunset! Gorgeous bird! Lovely, soothing poem. I enjoyed reading about the form…really does have a waltz-like rhythm! Take care, Kate!
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How beautiful! Is that a wild bird, or a tame one that got loose?
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Amazing photograph!!! The poem goes perfectly…a portrait in words to match the picture.
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So much joy to see this lovely bird waiting for you, Kate and you have taken a perfect picture. Loved the poem so full of love and beauty.
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Your poem is gorgeous – very peaceful, just like the content of your photos.
This post opened up okay. 🙂
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Don’t go!
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no I relocated a year ago to a cottage on the river … those river views are out my front river 🙂
Tiny has been on the market for 18 months, most want vans for quick escapes that a 4 ton off grid dream !
No great hopes for WP, lets see 🙂
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I wondered about the change in views. I must have missed that post about your relocation. Glad to have caught up now.
🤞
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aha can’t keep up with everything Norah 🙂
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I wish I could, but I can’t.
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SIGH 🙂
This flows so beautifully! And everything you pictured in words IS something to be grateful for in life! 🙂 The kettle boiling joyously made me so happy! 🙂
Yes, love and gratitude in being alive another day!
(((HUGS))) 🙂
PS…both of your photos in this post are fabulous!
Oh, that little cutie birdie!
My, in that gorgeous sky!
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Gorgeous pics and splendid waltz wave! Such serenity in your words…you did full justice to the form, sis.🙂
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much appreciated sis … syllable counts really are the pits to do but sound ok once accomplished … give me rhyme anytime!
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What a demanding form and you handled so well, Kate.
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The pome is lovely, Kate. And the pic is lovely too!
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Wow! I really like the way this one unwinds like a silk ribbon! So smooth!
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The sunset was equally spectacular
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I like those lines, Kate: :
“as world
slow-
ly un-
folds”
They are well pictured by the beautiful sunrise you show .
Love ❤
Michel
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That bird is stunning.
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yes he seemed quite tame so wondered if he was someones escaped pet 🙂
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Lovely bird and beautiful sky. Such Joy.
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I love the sing song quality. It speaks to me Kate, wonderful
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You’re doing a spectacular job 😊
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