- Write a Pentina having a theme of [war] garden, sorry reverted to flower power
with spring approaching I’m keen to garden
got seeds to grow colourful flowers
those that will attract birds and bees
add plenty of water and pray it’s sunny
so colours can wave in a warm breeze
butterflies flutter and sway on the breeze
in my small wondrous colourful garden
with an abundant variation of flowers
to attract those honey gathering bees
tempting taste-buds, making me sunny
wealth and fame seldom make one sunny
for they’re known to vanish in a breeze
more satisfaction is found from a garden
as it ignites smiles with bright flowers
and worthy production from our bees
watching the activity of industrious bees
warms my heart so cheerful and sunny
intoxicating scents waft on the breeze
as I earth myself in flower pots and garden
rejoicing at the colourful beauty of flowers
spirits lift with the beauty of flowers
who share their bounty with the bees
lifting my mood no matter wet or sunny
as if worries flutter away on the breeze
when I sit in a flourishing sunny garden
lift your mood by growing flowers in your sunny garden
aiding bees collection of nectar brings a satisfying breeze!
The pentina five verses of five lines each, with a two-line envoi, for a total of 27 lines.
Kate, your pentina showers me with some exquisite images of spring. I will hold on to these for sure. Who knows, I may even try writing a pentina. Blessings.
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oh please do RIchard, expanding our talents to include new forms keeps the grey matter functioning 🙂
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I love gardening. Beautiful verse, and pics, Kate! 🌺🦋
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You’re welcome, Kate!
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Beautiful poem, Kate, loved it. This is how nature is, we tend to forget our worries for a while and just get immersed in it. Loved the photos too, lovely 😊
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The envoi says it all Kate.
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thanks Paul!
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Lovely thoughts in your poem, Kate, accompanied by beautiful photographs. I wish you gardening success.
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no rush or need, know you’re super busy Norah 🙂
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Heartfelt poem, Kate. It is similar to the way I feel. The beauty and happiness what various bees and insects bring to our lives are incredible. Lovely colours and images.
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Wow, Beautiful! Thanks for sharing.
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My Summer is drawing to a close all too soon….it makes me envious of your coming Spring!
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lol I thought most had boiling hot summers and were desperately seeking autumn Ann … your life has been topsy turvy with too many challenges this summer!
Hopefully next summer will be a healthier happier one you can share with all your family together 🙂
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Love this!!!
Highly prefer your flower power poem over a war poem any day! Your words and your photos are uplifting, encouraging, smile-bringing, and blossoming-good-fun!!! 😉 😀
Gardens, and garden-visitors, are a joy to behold! Surrounding ourselves in nature is always healing! 🙂
🐝 🐛 🦋 🐞
(((HUGS))) 🙂
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very earthing Carolyn, thanks for the sunshine and good cheer your loving comments always bring 🙂
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You are like the bees , Kate , drunk by the colors and the scents of a summer flower garden ! 🙂
Love ❤
Michel
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Hi Kate, this is quite lovely. I don’t know the rules and regs of the Pentina poetry form. I loved this line the most “wealth and fame seldom make one sunny”. As always beautifully written.
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You are such a rebel!! (but then poets are like that at following directions 🙂 ) This is a wonderful execution of the Pentina and a very cheery word painting! I can tell you are itching to get your garden started!
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That gave me a pleasant buzz Kate, thanks for sharing
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What a lovely ode, Kate! Gorgeous pics too! ❤️🙂
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Refreshing and empowering poem, Kate. I too have few plants in my balcony and it is so nice to be growing these lovely flowers. Awesome pictures.
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Beautiful pentina, Kate
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Twenty seven lines of pure indugence in nature’s garden of delights .. ..
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Love your poem and the photos.
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Your pentina on flower soothes my heart. The images are so vivid i can see it clearly through your words Kate…and those photos, ahh, stunning😊😊😊
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Kate, Thank you for entertaining us with a positive message and beautiful photos of flowers. ❤ Have a great week!
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Beautiful pentina and pictures. 🙂
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Such a lovely time of the year captured here.
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