Val’s ASH # 12 write an Abecedarian poem about the path to self discovery.
awareness opens insightful understanding
beyond my immediate insular world
calm can’t descend until I cut expectations
delightful bliss will light my way
ever vigilant I need to transform any harm
for it will be my biggest downfall
generosity is also a key, more to others, less for me
hate and harm do far more damage
in our world than we could ever know
joy and bliss I will know with persistent effort
knowledge and wisdom should surely follow
like day follows night once I’ve got it right
mindfulness an essential ingredient
nourish it well to grow and mature
open my heart and my mind, please be kind
pain and pleasure a measure of each other
question everything for ignorance is foolish
read and write wisely to share my path
sincerity is greatly respected by all
tenderness and kind care attracts friends and resources
understanding enhances all my relationships
value it greatly for it gives birth to
wisdom which is both insightful and empowering
yielding love for all, it is my call
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Lifelong learning is satisfying. There is always something to learn and always room to grow. You covered a lot of territory in this thoughtful poem, Kate! ❤ Kudos!
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I finally found it! And it is beautiful! You really took this to the next level – not only achieved the summit but this is a road map to the stars! S’wunderful, s’marvelous! (I’ve got to use made up words to express the frabjoyous feeling this poem gives me!!!!)
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I’m hearing your calls loud and clear, which are uplifting my heart and mind 🙂
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Wow this is so amazing!! I loved this form, you created and composed so well and your writing never fails to convey message of wisdom 💛✨🌹
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generosity is also a key, more to others, less for me
hate and harm do far more damage
This is so true. Great poem Kate.
Dwight
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Accomplished. Brilliant. Connected. Dynamic. Encouraging. Fitting. Genuine. Helpful. Inspirational. Just. Knowing. Logical. Masterful. Now. Open-minded. POEM. 🙂 Quality. Rewarding. Saving. Thoughtful. Understanding. Valuable. Wisdom. XOXO 🙂 You. 🙂 Zestful.
(((HUGS))) 🙂
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I alwas said you were a talented poet, Kate ,filled with a lot of ideas and much imagination.
Love ❤
Michel
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Words of wisdom in every stanza, Kate. Hate and anger has never done anyone any good instead love and kindness works wonders.
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“hate and harm do far more damage” This one is getting really difficult for me these days. But I am trying.
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keep trying coz it just twists your guts inside out and nobody wins!
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I agree with Linda, there’s a lot of wisdom in this poem. Thank you Kate!
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I was struggling writing this prompt and i was thinking of you at the same time because i knew for sure you would nail this…and yes, standing ovation here kate …
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Awareness comes from not what’s there
But from of what you’re not aware
Confusion is what helps you see
Dawn anew. And lets you be
Enlightened by the rising sun
Favoured by the sacred one
Gifted with an inner sight
Heathen magic? Endless night?
Inner meaning. Outer calm
Join me darling. Arm in arm
Kindred spirits. Taste my wine
Linked together. Feeling fine
Miracles will come and go
No-one will know what we know
Only you and I can see
Potentially, of what must be
Quintessential harmony
Romance. It’s just you and me
Satan hears our marriage vows
The Lord stands silently, then bows
Understanding His demise
Validation. No surprise
Wondering. Is this a trance?
Xenobiotic circumstance?
Yielding to the master’s call
Zen means nothing. Zen means all.
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oh pops you truly must post this, your spontaneous poems are the best! Riske but family friendly, a tough one for you on Saturday night 🙂
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You’d be amazed at what I can still manage on a Saturday night, Kate, but this, perhaps, is not one of the great moments. I could try to edit it, I suppose, but then it might attempt to assume a meaning beyond itself (as I sometimes foolishly try to do). Any meaning, in fact, is to be found within the meaningless – that’s Zen, for you – don’t try to explain it ….
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repost it with nominal editing pops, it should be shared … and zen seems to be what people want it to be, it’s sure flexible 😉
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Wise words Kate. They remind me of Thich Nhat Hanh’s teaching.
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Wow, Kate.. you have listed it so beautifully. Great take on the abecedarian poem
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This flows gently and fluidly and that is because you have traversed this path with mindfulness. Well done, sis.
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A lovely reflection, Kate.
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Very impressive poem!!! Words of wisdom here, but so beautifully crafted.
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Wisdom, Kate!
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If happen to a tenth of your of you wondrous poem, would be enough for my aging soul .. and today I own a new furry-friend … “Frankie” the Cavoodle ..
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This poem is life a journey. I love the structure Kate
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I like how you’ve listed all the desirable traits Kate. Beautiful poem
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The mindfulness and reaching a heightened state of awareness! So well written and absolutely true about how expectations make us hyper and restless.
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