Val has set a challenge of poetry
most formats are totally absurd
waste of time and my word-worth
wondering if any of this has worth
these convoluted twists of poetry
I must laugh aloud it’s so absurd
it ties my mind in knots so absurd
the terms difficult, has it any worth
a testament to most bizarre poetry
so what is this absurd poetry worth?
Val from Murisposis has challenged us with ASH – August Scavenger Hunt
this is #7 write a Tritina with a touch of whimsy or nonsense.
Jackson Pollock … no idea how it got in amongst my pics
That’s a real tongue twister Kate, and it’s worth? Well it made me smile, so priceless 😊
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It is perfect how you used a poetry form to write about this :))
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OH MY GOODNESS!!! You just knocked this one out of the park – I am near speechless. You have wit, you are clever, and it is not nonsense so it must be whimsy!! I love this one beyond words!!!! ❤
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I so agree with your “take” on some convoluted poetry forms, and I’m amazed that you presented it in tritina format! How clever.
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All I know is I don’t know if I am coming or going. I think I passed the really bizarre more than once. Well done Kate. Now, let’s see if I can find my way home.
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Poetry is always worth it, even if all you come up with is fools gold 🙂
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are you calling me a fool Lisa 😉 you’re probably right 🙂
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No, I was looking in the mirror 🙂
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Lol! Fits the brief!
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When thinking of publishing, it sometimes seems a laugh; but there’s merit in the truth and joy in finding it! Thanks for this !
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If its fun and you had fun and joy in writing it, then all is good and gold.
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I am with you on this one Kate. Form without meaning is meaningless… Like a skeleton blowing in the wind! Well done.
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my general experience is that first born males are spoilt rotten, NO restrictions or limits in any way … and that’s not just my own family 🙂
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Haha! Love this one, sis! You aced it and the message is loud and clear! 😉😉
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A Trivial Tritina you say
Well I’m not in the mood today
For any frollicking in the hay
Ivor’s in lockdown and here I have too stay …
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This tritina will lead you , Kate , to Olympic games . But we did not need this to know you are at the top of the talent ! 🙂
Love
Michel
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lol you are far too kind, I wish … but love your poetic response!
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I have never heard of this form of poetry, Kate. A great way of presentation though.
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It seems you are frustrated with the restraints of form! I haven’t written any formal poetry for a long time – I put it down to exhaustion…
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maybe ease off a bit Ingrid … you’ve done so much with the anthology, d’Verse, parenting, pandemic … might be time for some ‘you’ time 🙂
Not frustrated in the least, I’m enjoying this rollicking challenge heaps 🙂
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I did paint my nails yesterday 💅 😅 family holiday coming up also 😊
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Love the whimsy vibe in your poem … lots of smiles here.
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Art is always priceless. So the the poetry is priceless as well.
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Well, the “absurdity” shines through, loud and clear. Fun and clever one!
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Yay, this is so whimsical and got my tongue twisted..and i love it .
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you are so clever!! well done!
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I can hear your voice when I read this very original poetic form, Kate! Well done, it made me smile…
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