we sprites have been given bad press
but like most we can be mischievous
or we can give unlimited help …
my favourite hang out is by the river
watching humans parade prancing
their kids and dogs do see us but
those arrogant clots quickly dismiss
their remarks, only the innocent see
I watch and wait to trip the sedate
or cause a commotion to attract
attention if a littilee is in distress
I do my utmost to ensure their safety
as the big ones seem clueless
to the dangers of the waters call
enticing any who might fall
victim to their rushing current
oblivious that all of nature has
their own voice to bewitch or calm
those least aware of our malice
or mercy, we choose which to
exercise as they underestimate
our input to their ungrateful lives
only first people’s know our potency
how to channel our contribution
to the thankless lives so totally
unaware of the enormous efforts
we sprites make to their earth!
my quirk is to lurk
invisibility a perk
with a sparkly smirk
d’Verse, a narrative voice, Ingrid
Ah… just found this one I read 2,3 and 1 – this is the only one allowing comments.
Fun!
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Wonderful observations and the poem. I find it difficult to cope with people who have cold behaviour towards what is happening in India these days. These people want to live in their own shell.
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it’s so wrong Rupali, our people are furious at what our PM did … he and Modi will go down for this!
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Kate, these words offer playfulness and even a little mischief on the side. I better be careful with what I write because one always wants to be on the good side of these spritely folks.
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Excellent Kate, so well written! Crisp rhyming!
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I love that last stanza especially. (K)
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Beautiful Kate! Ah the lore of the river is never ending! I love your narrative from the sprite’s perspective!
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I loved the poem… but I think we better have to treat them with respect…
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A loving and fun poem, Kate. I really loved your sprites. Keep it going in these times of crisis.
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I adore your sprites! This was wonderfully told and your closing lines made me grin delightedly.
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this is so awesome……..lots of smiles, thoughts and reflections!
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A fun poem, Kate, but I felt the sting of the water sprite’s smirk! Her disdain comes through in the lines:
‘those least aware of our malice
or mercy, we choose which to
exercise as they underestimate
our input to their ungrateful lives’.
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sprites also like to be appreciated Kim!
ignore or dismiss them at your own peril 🙂
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This is a joy to read…goodly and thought-provoking.
Lovely photo.
Keep up your quirk to lurk and smirk.
(((HUGS))) 🙂
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Enjoyed your take on this one, Kate. Loved the concluding lines. 🙂
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I adore the sprightly voice you have created here Kate: forces for good and mischief, visible only to the innocent, and protectors of them. I’m sure I used to dance with those sprites as a child, and my inner child still does!
I love the sound of your ending triplet as well, so playful!
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I knew there were unseen hands at work and now I know whose! Great voice there of the impish yet helpful sprites.
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Sprites!!! I hadn’t thought about them in many moon …. I thoroughly enjoyed this!
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Look like a primitive and innocent people,like in a dream, Kate
Love ❤
Michel
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Lovely nod to the wisdom of the First People and to the innocence of children that all too quickly is tossed aside in favor of facts.
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Stellar closing to this one, Kate 😀 I am grinning from ear to ear 💝💝
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Ah, this is a fun piece Kate and i am smiling..😊😊😊
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Ah, lurk, perk, smirk. I love it!
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Fun and helpful they are. I love the voice of the sprite and your ending lines are amazing with:
my quirk is to lurk
invisibility a perk
with a sparkly smirk
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wonderful sprites wish i was an innocent so i could meet them
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Dear Kate,
What fools these sprites do think us! And mostly they’re right. So many lines in this poem that hit just that right note of contempt and kindness — Well done!
~🕊Dora
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Oh those mischievous little faeries… I do like think my faeries are always happpy and helpful …
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lol the young ones make mischief coz they’re just having fun 🙂
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Such a enchanting poem Kate.
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