purply pink skies
erupt into a blue hue
clouds skid by
trying to fly
then blood red
from our sinking sun
heralds another day done
as moon and stars
glint in the silky dark
each hour ignites a spark
as she constantly changes gowns
d’Verse, sky in 44 words, De
Imagery is beautiful. Silk Gowns wow so appealing.
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Sky gown..love it.
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Absolute beauty. Another gem filled with brilliance on your part, Kate.
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wow i love your metaphor here Kate… really beautiful
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The sky is never still…it does seem like a constant costume change. (K)
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Wonderful images to dream about! A brilliant sunset gives us a glimpse into the Creator’s imagination.
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It’s something to behold to watch the sun set and the stars come out one by one…. I hope you’re keeping well 🙂
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Sunsets can be fantastic…
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Loving this description you’ve writ….most especially these words
“clouds skid by
trying to fly”
So unique to use the word skidding yet I can see it….
And how wonderful, that last line. Personification sublime!
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For sure she changes her gowns in all her beauteous colours everyday. Such a lovely and joyous poem, Kate. Too good and what an awesome picture.
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Oh I love that you dress the sky in her many gowns. She is so very versatile, isn’t she? Lovely, Kate.
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This message is so powerful and inspiring.
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Oh my goodness!!! I absolutely love this poem!!!!! You have outdone yourself with this one….Really good, Kate! 🙂 Really, great!!!
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Such a beauteous gown you have painted with your many hued words! Gorgeous, Kate. ❤️
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Such beautiful wordings and I just love the last line.
You are blessed to experience this first hand and we are to read your talent.
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Beautiful words and sky!
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She has such a beautiful, extensive wardrobe and such wonderful fashion taste! 😉
Love this poem, SweetKate!!! 🙂
I, too, am a sky watcher. 🙂
HUGS!!! 🙂
PS…our skies have been too smoky lately…but just yesterday I finally saw some shades of blue. 🙂
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I love to watch the sky change colour throughout the day – what a wonderful way to portray that is if the sky were constantly changing gowns!
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Oh I love the imagery you painted. So beautifully penned.
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It is always fun to humanise the sky or sea , even the wind and rain. Then we can give them feelings too!
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Well articulated…
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A colourful quadrille, Kate, and I love the personification of the sky as a woman constantly changing gowns.
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Despite gloomy prospects of covid-19, I am glad you are still seeing the beauty of nature.
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covid is just another passing blotch on our horizon, life is far more than that 🙂
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Another stunning piece, Kate. I love the changes in the shades of the sky, and the comparison to it changing like gowns… That’s perfect imagery. I love this piece, it’s beautiful.
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Fine work indeed, Kate. I loved watching her change. My hat is off.
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Love this image… clouds skid by trying to fly… moon changing gowns as we watch!
Great poem Kate.
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This is a delightful verse! I love the personification of day as a fashionista! Every day a new gown… And always lovely.
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Oh I love the imagery created by your words
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Impressive Kate!
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Wonderfully lyrical, Kate! Indeed, you chose the perfect word in “seductress.”
Very few of life’s experiences are as mesmerizing as the hour when day and night melt into each other. Day yields eventually, but only after the most breathtaking display. Then it’s the stars’ turn to put on a show of their own.
Missed it today? Same time tomorrow, give or a take a minute. Never gets old, either.
Thanks, Kate, for sending us tickets!
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Oh, so much action, sultry and mysterious. Your verb choices are stellar: erupt, glint, skid, ignite. I feel like passion just pours out and grabs the lucky reader for a dance!
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The sky “constantly changes gowns” — beautifully written!
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Your enchanting imagery has captured the scene exquisitely Kate… 😀😎🌗
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Wonderful use of metaphor here, Kate! The sky is undoubtedly a delicious array of mood, emotion and colour 😀
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Oh that is gorgeous!! As well as the color imagery, I love that the clouds “skid”–wonderful 🙂
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I love watching the changing colors. That photo is amazing!
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So true! It’s a different scene every hour n day… never monotonous n boring 😃 beautifully penned!
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Sunrise and sunset present a daily ever-changing delicious array of color . We need to spend more time appreciating them!
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Great metaphor, Kate! Sunsets can be very dramatic! Love your photo! ❤ All the best! Cheryl
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Beautiful words. Loved how you described the sky as a woman changing gowns.
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Hi Kate! This piece you wrote today was wonderful to read. BTW — This is something I need to share with my fellow writers here at dVerse. I so enjoy reading the work that you create and post, and am genuinely honored to be embraced as a part of this community of poets. May we all find healing in these challenging times. And as a true aquarian love child, and also a proud flower child of the 60’s, who truly believed then we would some day change the world to be a better place for all, and still believes that we might yet do it — I wish each of you peace, health, and love. Write on!
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Yesssss! Sky color as gown = fantastic!
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