the ghostly galleons
arose through the fog and smoke
then silently glided north
with the occasional burst of fire
to help them rise
showing paying guests our town
far removed from the consuming fires
that have taken three lives
and more than a hundred and fifty homes
the fog is cool and misty
rising from our river
the smoke a choking blanket
an irritating symptom of those losses
with more heat on it’s way
drought ravages our resources
all available fire fighters
and their equipment
assisting property and folk
they say it thundered through
like a speeding train
no time to prepare or run
they hunkered down as
their homes burnt to the ground
looters already stealing
anything left as those people
grieve the loss of everything
wildlife livestock nothing untouched
they claim an Indian storm
was a precursor to our maelstrom
but we live in a country of violent
extremes flood fire and drought
we all know someone touched
but pray it won’t be us …
prayers please for all those suffering …
Devastating fires. I follow a blogger who lost everything this time last year in the fire in Paradise,U.S. It destroyed his home of nearly forty years and all personal possessions. Very sad.
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it’s the personal possessions that really cause most grief, then the disappointment that scavengers would come looting … these personal affronts do far more damage 😦
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Such a poem that shows the drama of a man who looks at the fire consuming the achievements of his life. A poem about the terrible element of fire. Drought and human carelessness is the cause of many tragedies. We feel sorry, we pray.
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So tragic and so sad and so scary. I join you in praying for everyone involved.
We lived in two different places where summer fires were just a common occurrence. 😦 Many people started the summers by putting sentimental possessions (photographs, heirlooms, etc.) in their cars (as much as they could fit), so if they had to evacuate quickly, at some point, they knew they could save a few special things.
Important, timely poem, SweetKate. Emotion evoking. Helps the reader understand and care. Thank you for writing it and sharing it.
(((HUGS)))
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the water choppers are busy here right above my head, taking their loads to and fro plus the smoke … it’s surreal with so many homes and lives lost. This was not a usual fire area so nobody was prepared although we are constantly warned!
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Oh my, that smokey picture says a lot. So do your words. Thanks for giving us some insight to this terrible problem.
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Thank you for this. it is truly awful for these poor people.
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Very, very devastating for sure. Heart goes out to all affected by it. We had the same level of wildfire in northern Canada in the community of Fort McMurray, Alberta a few years ago. People had minutes to evacuate.
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The rain gods are definitely needed dear Kate, hopefully soon, xxx
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prayers have been sent up. i am so very sorry you and those around you are going through this.
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So scary. Prayers.
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These fires are horrendous and scary, Kate. A sad and poignant poem.
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sadly there is no end in sight … I’m a very long way from the fires yet the air is thick with smoke and ash …
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So sad! So many lives lost…
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Gosh! So terrible…
Are the fires under control now?
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thanks so much … still extreme fires in three states, lost more than 200 homes 😦
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A beautiful tribute to those who have suffered such devastating losses. And a reminder to continue to pray for them. Because their pain is not over yet.
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Such a sad state of affairs! I will add the survivors to my prayers today!!
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So sorry to read this
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Poignant writing, Kate, which your personal experience makes all the more heartrending.
Thoughts, wishes, etc. for you and your neighbors.
Unfortunately, while some fires are our fault, i.e., kids playing with matches, untended campfires and the like, others strike with lightening’s randomness.
We don’t usually pray for rain, but in tis case….
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thanks Keith, they have actually declared it a state of emergency … means they can throw more resources at it including the military!
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I’m so sorry, Kate! Nothing is worse than a wildfire, except perhaps for some people’s reactions…how can you possibly loot from those who are already suffering?
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some people seem to have no moral compass Ann 😦
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Sad and yes heard about it on the news channel. Our earth is getting destroyed by a few selfish people, Kate. Who is doing this nonsense. A great poem
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The fires in California…. that is what this reminds me of.
The bad air quality for folks miles away.
All the brave firefighters…
May recovery be quick. Extended prayers from here.
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This is certainly catastrophic. Big salute to all those who are put their lives on the line to save others, they are the real heroes.
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So very poignant and horrendous catastrophe. God Bless all the people involved. 🙏😇😥
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thanks but they need a lot more practical help … so many have lost their homes and all their worldly possessions, more than 200 + 4 lives lost, its tragic 😦
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There are no words to describe the sorrow all of you are experiencing.
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