Vic was charming and slick
picked up many a cute chick
keeping them was the trick
coz Vic became a real prick
the drink made him sick
tried to beat them with a stick
they’d give him the flick
so he avoided the nick
dVerse, Nick, quadrille 44 words, De Jackson
NB the man depicted is the complete opposite to Vic – a gentle family man …
aroused 
Slick Nick, the Prick! I can see the charm of his stick 😉
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A common story, unfortunately, but you tell it well and I like the rhyming.
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Cool instrument. I have a mini type – just a frog. When you take the stick from the middle you draw it across the ridges on its back. 🙂
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sounds interesting too, this has become a bit of a traditional ozzie instruments … beer tops on a stick 😎
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That man is so cool and he looks veru adorable and reading your responses from the comments i am glad to know he is not the Vic in the poem.
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Your poem is great
I truly liked it mate
Vic does sound like a prick
He would make many sick
Keep on rhyming Kate
Gotta go cause I’m late
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lovely contribution thanks Susan, love it when a post inspires others creativity ❤
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Sadly, there are a lot of Nicks in this world!
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Good friends that saved him from the nick despite the fact that he turned into a prick
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This made me smile so wide
Vic should learn to glide
Which reality with to side
Him, should we chide
This is so bad, but I don’t need to hide
Love, light and glitter
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lol lovely rhyming response, thanks for adding that gem Eliza 🙂
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Hi Kate. Wonderful use of the word nick in your quadrille. That drink makes many mean.
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I enjoyed the almost limerick quality of your poem. I may not like Vic, but I like your poem.
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Vic! Uck! Ack! and Ick! 😦
Ha! Love the rhyming and message, but do not like people like Vic!
The man in the photo looks fun, though! 🙂
HUGS!!! 🙂
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he is a really gorgeous character … had his own furniture business for decades but now makes more money busking a couple of hours at Circular Quay than he could make a week in his business. Plays that bottle top stick to old tunes .. he’s super sweet 🙂
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Hahaha so cute and he really is a lovely old prick. Nice rhythmic poem, Kate. Loved it.
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LOL–love it.
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Sounds like Nick should have skipped the bottle and the sips! Well done.
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thank you for the smiles. 🙂
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LOVE all the fun rhyme you’ve used here!
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He’s no guy I Know from Vic
I think we respect our chicks’
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Nick has become a prick in several poetic ports out here on the trail; naughty Nick.
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Love all the fun rhyme here!
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