This is the delivery

can you spot the mistake?

Builder will only listen to praise

not open to improving his product


Here is the compost loo

shame the flu

is only half mast

fumes make me garsp


Inside is totally delightful

the attention to detail

quality materials

plenty of storage and light


Grey water has different sized outlets

none joined; outside power points unsafe

gutters splash over the power and gas

sky light has warped the roofing


Legs to stabilize quite fragile

too bad if you don’t own your block

steps and patio in doubt

until I find the perfect spot


I wouldn’t change anything

as this is the dream

eventually things will settle

having paid work sure helps!


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