Dan is a smart young man

he studies hard, a tech natural

gets his fun rip sticking

Swaying from side to side,

doing loops and wiggles

he made me giggle

A good heart and gentle manner

catch him when he starts to date

coz he’ll make a really great mate!

PS He is Miriam’s lovely son who I had the good fortune to meet during their travels!


  1. Reblogged this on Out an' About and commented:
    How could I not reblog this?

    It’s not every day one’s son has a birthday poem written for him by a talented wordsmith.

    Thank you my friend.

    Make sure you visit her blog for regular words that challenge and entertain.

    Liked by 1 person

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